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Τίτλος: GHOST CITY (May)
Αποστολή από: rakenditos στις 03/06/09, 13:22

Grey...
walls of city abandoned
signs gradating , falling
raindrops
at the end of
May...

Grey...
broken glasses running
fangless ,empty casltes
silence
what a cloudy
day...

hey...
tell me which path did you
follow encanted , blinded
by the
colours of this
May...

hey...!!!!
strange whispers rising
nine ravens flapping
voices
asking you to
stay...

Pray...
Little Jesus bleeding
crucified and helpless
watching
from the chappel -
hey!!!
please forgive your servant
listen to these words that
no one ever dared to
say...

..they...
they have died sepherd
i have seen their blood dried
painting
red the sky of
May

HEY!!!!!
i was walking silent
through the field of murder
when i saw
that vision
..grey....

..now...

i wander frightened
searching for remains
and i have 
nothing else than that to
say...

HEYYYYYYYYYYYYY

WHAT A WEIRD SEASON,
WHAT A CITY HOPELESS
WHAT A SAD
SAD

PLACE TO STAY.....

Τίτλος: Απ: GHOST CITY (May)
Αποστολή από: gkou στις 03/06/09, 14:09

Πέρα από κάποια λαθάκια, μου άρεσε πολύ, και σαν νόημα και σαν απόδοση!!! :)